KK-was this the correct play?

[GRETZKY427]

Seat 4: adoles85 (3,510)
Seat 5: Marion13 (1,130)
davvve1985 posts the small blind of 5
adoles85: also ein ysammler
adoles85 posts the big blind of 10
The button is in seat #2
*** HOLE CARDS ***
Dealt to GRETZKY427 [Kc Ks]
Marion13 folds
Marion13: yenau
GRETZKY427 has 15 seconds left to act
GRETZKY427 raises to 40
davvve1985 calls 35
adoles85 has 15 seconds left to act
adoles85: sorry aber ich kann das nicht zulassen
adoles85 calls 30
*** FLOP *** [2s 2c Js]
davvve1985 checks
adoles85 bets 70
Marion13: hab hie nu scho 70000 gesammelt
GRETZKY427 has 15 seconds left to act
GRETZKY427 raises to 170
davvve1985 calls 170
adoles85 calls 100
*** TURN *** [2s 2c Js] [3d]
davvve1985 checks
adoles85 checks
GRETZKY427 bets 240, and is all in
Marion13: oh wieder full
davvve1985 folds
adoles85 folds
Uncalled bet of 240 returned to GRETZKY427
GRETZKY427 mucks
GRETZKY427 wins the pot (630)
*** SUMMARY ***
Total pot 630 | Rake 0
Board: [2s 2c Js 3d]
Seat 2: GRETZKY427 (button) collected (630), mucked
Seat 3: davvve1985 (small blind) folded on the Turn
Seat 4: adoles85 (big blind) folded on the Turn
Seat 5: Marion13 didn't bet (folded)

[Mango]

Im no expert but I think it went well, you won 63BB without a showdown

[Murphmaester]

Don't post the results of your hand next time if you want some feedback on how you played it, what you should do. Just cut it off at the turn and then ask what others would do in this spot.

You played this well, as mango said you couldn't have done better, but the actual result is irrelevant. You could have been called by someone with JJ and lost your dough but still would have done the right thing.

[GRETZKY427]

Cheers for your responses

Full Tilt Poker Game #17268578741: Table .COM Play 433 (6 max) - 5/10 - No Limit Hold'em - 6:48:22 ET - 2010/01/02
Seat 1: bigtime806 (850)
Seat 2: Erzilein (1,475)
Seat 3: GRETZKY427 (1,470)
Seat 4: Adam931006 (1,035)
Seat 5: nami99 (7,505)
Seat 6: jere_mi33 (1,285)
Erzilein posts the small blind of 5
GRETZKY427 posts the big blind of 10
The button is in seat #1
*** HOLE CARDS ***
Dealt to GRETZKY427 [Ts 5d]
Adam931006 calls 10
nami99 calls 10
jere_mi33 folds
bigtime806 calls 10
Erzilein calls 5
GRETZKY427 checks
*** FLOP *** [Qh Tc 9c]
Erzilein bets 50
GRETZKY427 has 15 seconds left to act
GRETZKY427 raises to 100
Adam931006 calls 100
nami99 calls 100
bigtime806 calls 100
Erzilein calls 50
*** TURN *** [Qh Tc 9c] [5h]
Erzilein bets 550
GRETZKY427 has 15 seconds left to act
GRETZKY427 raises to 1,100
Adam931006 folds
nami99 calls 1,100
bigtime806 folds
Erzilein raises to 1,365, and is all in
GRETZKY427 calls 260, and is all in
nami99 calls 265
Erzilein shows [7h Qc]
GRETZKY427 shows [Ts 5d]
nami99 shows [6h Jh]
*** RIVER *** [Qh Tc 9c 5h] [8d]
Erzilein shows a pair of Queens
nami99 shows a straight, Queen high
nami99 wins the side pot (10) with a straight, Queen high
GRETZKY427 shows two pair, Tens and Fives
nami99 wins the main pot (4,630) with a straight, Queen high
Erzilein is sitting out
GRETZKY427 adds 200
*** SUMMARY ***
Total pot 4,640 Main pot 4,630. Side pot 10. | Rake 0
Board: [Qh Tc 9c 5h 8d]
Seat 1: bigtime806 (button) folded on the Turn
Seat 2: Erzilein (small blind) showed [7h Qc] and lost with a pair of Queens
Seat 3: GRETZKY427 (big blind) showed [Ts 5d] and lost with two pair, Tens and Fives
Seat 4: Adam931006 folded on the Turn
Seat 5: nami99 showed [6h Jh] and won (4,640) with a straight, Queen high
Seat 6: jere_mi33 didn't bet (folded)

Damm unlucky with the river card, happens all the time.

[nickkaka]

are these play money hands?

[GRETZKY427]

Yes these 2 hands where play money hands.

I play both play and real money games.

[Elvis]

Don't post the results of your hand next time if you want some feedback on how you played it, what you should do. Just cut it off at the turn and then ask what others would do in this spot.
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Also don't cut off the top of the HH. Knowing if it is a 6max, stack sizes, blind levels etc etc influences decisions.


Also- Play money hands are unlikely to get you any serious replies.